Women in modern society

Women in modern society

In modern society, women play an important role in it ,more and more women take part in political ,economic affairs and so on. In the past , women couldnt study in school but now they can do it ,also some of them study very well
In political, there are many women who own an important power to control other people to devote to society.In economic, many women can earn a lot of money , in universities many and many gain a high mark to study aboard even more than man .so it indicates that women play an important part in society .
But some people think , sometimes we do not treat women equally, such as recruit ，many companies employ only women except man, sometimes we men have not equal rights to women .
In my opinion, it is necessary to give some rights to women to reach a state that we are equal to each other , we all have freedom in our country,I also think more and more women should play an important part in society because we are equal to each other ! 注意元音前的不定冠词用 AN. 多用同义词或近义词.